You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Good day dear

Mr.

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Anderson. I am a tenant of one of your apartments and living in P336 with my family. I am writing

this

letter regarding some problems which appear in our flat. As you know our flat

located

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on the

third

floor and completely whole rooms see

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the South and South-West. We have lived there since autumn and do not use the air conditioner. Recently, I turned on the air conditioner and realized that it does not work at all. I hope you understand that living without a cooling system in the

summer time

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very difficult and

unplesant

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unpleasant

. I would like to ask you to send to my apartment a technical staff and check and fix a piece of equipment. The most suitable time for me is the morning of

Monday 25th or the evening of Saturday 31th. If any reason you can accept my schedule could you please send me your proposal by email phone me and we can discuss it. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

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Your

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sincerely, Alexey.

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