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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Good
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, what does it means. What should we do for our
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 and how we have to teach them to be good
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? In
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 essay let's try to discuss that. Good
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 what are they do and how can we count that ability to be. I think that meaning "good
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" is a much wider definition than people think.
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 of all, if
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 want to teach their
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 how to be good
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 they should be self best
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 for them maybe
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 sound trivial but is it true. For young people, their father and mother or other relatives are like mentors.
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, If you have poor behaviour and ask your son or daughter "please do not do like that" it will not be work because
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's copies
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 attitude and in the future, they will do exactly like you. In my opinion,
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 should not teach how to be better for their
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 they are must be like
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, study that ability in school is not a good idea. Schools or college teaching us fundamental science but good
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 or good people is not like mathematical skills like count, divide and so on. Unfortunately, we do not have a educations programs "How to be a good friend" or "Good father by hours" even "Grandparents - best of the best". In conclusion, only we ourselves and by our own example, we can be good
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 for our
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 and they are will look at us and teaching be like we are.
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