Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Our ecosystem is highly complicated,
therefore
, any slight changes in the normality can lead to some huge repercussions. There are some people who consider that wild animals do not play any significant role in the present world. I, personally disagree with the statement since the normal function of Linking Words
environment
is closely related to animals in wild.
Add an article
the environment
First
and foremost, many creatures in the forest really help to maintain the natural process of Linking Words
ecosystem
. If they are disappeared entirely from the earth, it will lead to a situation, where humans can not survive any Add an article
the ecosystem
an ecosystem
further
. Linking Words
For example
, when the number of tigers Linking Words
were
killed in India, eventually, the population of herbivores were dramatically increased. Change the verb form
was
This
not only did they start searching Linking Words
food
in farmlandsChange preposition
for food
,
but destroyed many Remove the comma
apply
agriculture
lands. Replace the word
agricultural
This
contributed Linking Words
a
famine in that area, so it is understood how important to save our wildlife.
Another point here is that hardly any modern or sophisticated technology could replace the creatures as their position can be replaced. The main reason for Change preposition
to a
this
is that these organisms have bothLinking Words
directly and indirectly
could influence on the place where they live. Add the comma(s)
, directly and indirectly,
For instance
, when Linking Words
an
extinction of Remove the article
apply
lion
happens there are many organisms which live with help of these Correct article usage
a lion
can
be washed from the mouth of the world. It has been witnessed in many parts of the world.
In conclusion, people have a different opinion on whether is it significant to have wild animals in Correct pronoun usage
that can
this
century. In my opinion, they are Linking Words
also
Linking Words
equal
part of our nature as equal as mankind.Correct article usage
an equal
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