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Write about the following topic: In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nobody would dispute the fact that people should follow the
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 and know what is happening in the world.
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, nowadays a
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 of youngsters are not interested in the
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 and do not follow them. In
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 essay, I will find the causes of
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 problem and try to come up with a solution. Today we can find a
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 of different social media where you can learn about the recent
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such
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 as Telegram or Facebook and you can find there a
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 of important information like weather forecasts or new laws that the government has passed. Unfortunately, very few young people are following and reading them. The reason for
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 is that they are not interested in them.
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, as a youngster, I always spent my free time watching funny videos or playing games
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 of reading the
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 or books.
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, young people can be more intelligent if they are following the
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.  There are some ways to encourage children to follow the
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. I believe that parents should give an example for their child and try to read newspapers in front of their child.
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, in my childhood, I was always copying my father.
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, the teachers in schools could encourage students to pay more attention to the
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.
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, teachers can start their lessons with a discussion of what happened over the weekend. To sum up, I reckon that the
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 is very important and you can gain a
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 of knowledge from them. Parents should definitely encourage children to read recent events.
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