Government should spend money on railways rather than roads . Agree or disagree?

people
have different views about spending money on railways rather than roads.some
people
argue that build
railway
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is much
more
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better than roads.
However
,
i
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believe that make a road is more helpful for
people
. These days,we have witnessed
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majority
majarity
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a majarity
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of
people
prefer to take
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a trip
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by their own
car
.There are many reasons for
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by
car
.
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,They are able to drive
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own pace
also
can choose which road is appropriate for arriving distinct.
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,some
people
are not
fan
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a fan
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of
traveling
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travelling
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by train because
some times
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sometimes
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the trains are overcrowded and we are restricted by schedule time.They rather using
car
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a car
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,bus. In conclusion,due to the reasons mentioned above,
i
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would argue that
,
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apply
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spending money on railways is useless.because most
people
prefer to use
car
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the car
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,bus
instead
of train.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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