Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modern building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's
world
of technology and the internet, many people believe that restoring old monuments is just
waste
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of money and energy.
Instead
of maintaining
them
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they should be demolished and
one
should construct
new
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property.
However
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I believe keeping old structure are as important as keeping our history alive.
Firstly
, old buildings are part of
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rich heritage and it is vital to keep them for future generations. By way of keeping
them
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we can demonstrate how rich our culture is and at the same
time
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it holds significant importance as they are
timeless
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a timeless
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piece of art.
For instance
in many parts of India especially in
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of
Rajasthan
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you can find spectacular forts which are
pleasure
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for
eyes
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and
finest
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piece of architecture. With the help of annual repair and maintenance work if those forts can regain their old charm
then
why shouldn't we keep them?
Secondly
, old structures attract tourist from all over the
world
which will not only help the economy but
also
generates employment opportunities to the youth.
For example
,
Taj
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Mahal
one
of the seven wonders of the
world
based out in Agra, India attracts millions of tourist
accross
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across
the globe.
This
not only put India on
world
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map but
also
help
local
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community to flourish. There are many erections which
forms
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part of the
World
Heritage site for which organization provide funds to maintain them on yearly basis and if any alteration
need
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to be done to those properties prior approval has to be taken. To conclude
this establishments
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are part of history and national asset which
one
should be proud of and should not be demolished at any cost.
However
, they should be preserved in their
as is
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state
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a state
the state
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so that we can show it to our upcoming generation and they can learn from
those finest architecture
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that finest architecture
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. There are
many
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open
space
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spaces
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where
one
can construct new modern structures
instead
of breaking old ones.
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