Lone traveling and travelling with companions both have their pros and cons. Discuss and state your preference.

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There are mainly two types of trips
first
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is travelling mono and
second
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is travelling in a
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. Both have their merits and demerits, maybe
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trip
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has more benefits than lone. Let's start with a discussion on a
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of spirituality, when a person wants to find his inner self or achieve any goal hard like the diamond lone
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is planned. Seeking out benefits of it, It does not have any kind of barrier constructed in the
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like, which mode of transport to choose, what will be the most prefered place to go and stay, what time is best to plan a
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.
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, these trips can be arranged with a single decision only.
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, of ,course there is no coin with
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side only, the bane of
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kind of vacation is, if traveller found himself in any of the difficulty or mate an accident there may be no
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to help.
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,
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tourer was climbing through the mountains and suddenly fall because it is a very narrow passage to climb. He ended up sticking his hand by side of a rock and stuck there for 3 days and at ,
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he ended up breaking his hand to survive. Moving forward with discussion on a
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of joy and bonding, when a
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of friends or cousins crew or family plans a vacation mostly everyone who is anticipating in that
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gets really excited and comes up with different plans on where should we go to when will we come back. looking for its pros, the main limitation of solo travelling act as a most significant benefit here.
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, as the crew ,size increases possibilities of enjoyment
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hikes, now the journey of hours does not irritate here.
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talking, passing on jokes, dancing always continues here.
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,
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it has more and important advantages it does not mean that it is a full-proof plan, the advantage of lone
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work is a limitation on a
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vacation, adding that if any bottleneck occurs in the plan the whole crew suffers from that.
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, If traffic blocks the road for hours, the place visiting is closed, the bus founds some breakdown and many more. In my preference,
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the limitations of travelling with companions, I'll always go on that
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. Because it has more boons than the lone travelling and it is not as risky as the other
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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