Lone traveling and travelling with companions both have their pros and cons. Discuss and state your preference.

#companions

There are mainly two types of trips

first

is travelling mono and

second

is travelling in a

group

. Both have their merits and demerits, maybe

group

trip

has more benefits than lone. Let's start with a discussion on a

tour

of spirituality, when a person wants to find his inner self or achieve any goal hard like the diamond lone

trip

is planned. Seeking out benefits of it, It does not have any kind of barrier constructed in the

trip

like, which mode of transport to choose, what will be the most prefered place to go and stay, what time is best to plan a

trip

Moreover

, these trips can be arranged with a single decision only.

However

, of ,course there is no coin with

one

side only, the bane of

this

kind of vacation is, if traveller found himself in any of the difficulty or mate an accident there may be no

one

to help.

For example

one

tourer was climbing through the mountains and suddenly fall because it is a very narrow passage to climb. He ended up sticking his hand by side of a rock and stuck there for 3 days and at ,

last

he ended up breaking his hand to survive. Moving forward with discussion on a

tour

of joy and bonding, when a

group

of friends or cousins crew or family plans a vacation mostly everyone who is anticipating in that

tour

gets really excited and comes up with different plans on where should we go to when will we come back. looking for its pros, the main limitation of solo travelling act as a most significant benefit here.

Furthermore

, as the crew ,size increases possibilities of enjoyment

also

hikes, now the journey of hours does not irritate here.

Moreover

talking, passing on jokes, dancing always continues here.

However

although

it has more and important advantages it does not mean that it is a full-proof plan, the advantage of lone

tour

work is a limitation on a

group

vacation, adding that if any bottleneck occurs in the plan the whole crew suffers from that.

For example

, If traffic blocks the road for hours, the place visiting is closed, the bus founds some breakdown and many more. In my preference,

although

the limitations of travelling with companions, I'll always go on that

trip

. Because it has more boons than the lone travelling and it is not as risky as the other

one

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