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Many people used distance- learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Distance
courses
 are popular among many;
however
, is studying physically in institutes and universities more profitable than these? Considering the flexibility of
time
besides
 more options to choose from, I find
this
 argument entirely to be false?
Distance
 learning can be done any part of the day.
This
 is because all
study
 material is available all the
time
 in different forms
such
 as recorded lectures, on YouTube, and so on.
Although
 people believe that overall development - Leadership skills, team spirit skills, communication skills, discipline behaviour happen at institutes since
this
 studying at home can help in to spend more quality
time
 with family and loved ones and one can
also
 do freelancing jobs to acquire practical knowledge;
consequently
, the option to
study
 at any
time
 is better than
distance
 learning for the overall development of a person. To exemplify, a professor of Cambridge University revealed that in their university 20% of the staff was certified by online
courses
 only. Along with the option to
study
 at any
time
, one has more alternatives to chance what he wants to
study
 in
distance
courses
. Since the variety of national and international
courses
 available in all types of fields, which would help scholars to pursue their passion and achieve their dream occupation.
For instance
, had an online fashion designing course not been available to complete through
distance
, my friend could be a famous fashion designer. In conclusion, owing to not only pliable hours for e-learning way but
also
 a variety of different
study
 policy, I am convinced that online
courses
 are more fruitful than the regular ones available on college premises.
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