In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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is better, depends upon the public to public. In my view, both play an important role. My

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few paragraphs will shape up my position. The

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is one of the best

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systems for the massive amount of people.

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, it has some pros and cons. If the authority spends more money on the

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, maybe more

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will come and go from one place to another but the

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is more suitable for a little bit longer journey rather than a shorter journey. A

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travelling charges lower cost than any other

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. But it has a fixed timing when we can use it. If someone does late for few minutes maybe he has to wait for hours to

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another rail. The

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journey is less risk full than any other

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, the government can take the decision to spend more money on constructing new

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lines. Some stations don't allow the user to enter without a card. In some ,cases

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is the smart

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still it's a hassle for many customers. Existing

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conveys some values of that countries or officials. Some public

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may be running for more than 100 years, whereas some are

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traditional. if we build a new kind of

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maybe the older

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will be lost their appeal, rather could be done on things, as

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is older,

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we can improve it for better ,

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, it can keep its value to the public.

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existing

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like buses and other vehicle is easily accessible at any time. if

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do late for 10 minutes

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maybe I've to wait for 20 minutes to get another bus and that's fair. The public can access it by card or cash so no hassle over there. as the existing public

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is serving from many years ago,

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, need to improve them for providing better service. In some countries, the population is increasing more and more and

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, building new

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line is a kind of

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of land because trains need a particularly different route.

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it's easy to convey massive people at once from one place to another. Due to older, existing

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can occur frequent accident,

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there has some historic value. At

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, I can say that

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both views can be applicable. There are definite pros and cons for both views from

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country to country.