You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In recent years,
architectural
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framework has never failed to attract people’s attention and spark controversy over the responsibility of
this
construction
on the country. Some firmly hold a view that scheme and building are concerned by the authority in a metropolis;
however
, to the best of my knowledge, I personally believe that the state should not take control over the picture of houses and other facilities. On the one hand, the authority is responsible for creating shelter for its
resident
.
In other words
, the government has to protect the country's welfare,
such
as education, health care, especially framework.
First
, the state constructs the architecture of roads, bridges, and other accommodations, which benefits the
resident
and properly uses residents' taxes.
Second
, the drawing of enormous
construction
requires lots of sponsorship and money from the authorities.Those outweigh individual capacities in finance.
As a result
, with the ministry’s responsibility, the crowded city will have
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astonishing house and a peaceful place to live.
On the other hand
, individuals have the privilege to design their own houses or private
construction
because that represents the freedom for everyone to practice democracy.
For instance
, we could have planned the blueprint of the house
then
acted to construct and decorate that block with our tastes.
Furthermore
, entrepreneurs possibly invest their money to build up large and influential architecture without law involvement.
However
, the
construction
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to be limited
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and not for military and terrorist purposes.
Therefore
,
resident
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could attach their distinct house to the country to increase the diversity infrastructure and the individual's liberty. As in the aforementioned explanations, though
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a great impact on building framework for their
resident
, the model of
resident
' houses or freedom to construct can’t be plundered by the authority in the big cities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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