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Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think that it encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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some people believe that advancement in
technology
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helps
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 in reducing
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,there are others who believe that it supports
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 essay discusses for and against
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technology
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crime
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 believe that
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 will assist in minimizing
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illegal activities. on the one hand,due to the progress in
technology
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,it helped countries in various sectors ,but in terms of cutting
crimes
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, it is not effective.Even after installing security cameras in public places,the
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 rate is increasing drastically.Nowadays,cybercrimes are a big issue
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 any country.To illustrate,Recently in the county of America ,many
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 websites have been hacked by hackers and
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 challenging nationals integrity.
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,
Technology
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 plays a vital role in identifying criminals with the help of fingerprints.By using mobiles one can easily call the police if he is being attacked.Terrorist locations can be exactly identified by using global positioning system
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 with the help of satellites.Nowadays,
technology
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 can be used to prevent
crimes
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 before occurring.To illustrate,there are very advance scanners which can detect bombs before it explodes.
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 by helps in reducing
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 with various technological features. in conclusion,Though
technology
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 can be seen as a positive and negative development,I strongly recommend it can be used in cutting
crimes
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 very effectively
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