Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Few
people
say that the amount of
waste
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from home is not enough.They
also
thought that
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the
government
should take some legal steps
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encourage
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people
to
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.I think that
,
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only the laws can make
people
more aware of their
waste
.
To begin
with,when the authority
impose
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some rules
then
folks will more responsible
about
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their
waste
.
In other words
,they will think that
,
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it is their responsibility to recycle more
waste
.
Furthermore
,every citizen will aware that
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their duty to recycle
waste
.A prime example is Japan, where
people
must have to recycle their
waste
because the authority has some strict rules about recycling.So,when the
government
put few regulations on recycling,
then
people
will take
this
as their duty which will help the state authority to encourage
people
to recycle. Another point to consider is,if the
government
take some legal steps
then
every individual of that nation must have to maintain,
otherwise
they will get punished.
In addition
,every law has some rules and when a
people
break the rule
then
he will
penalished
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penalised
punished
.So,when the laws put on the home for recycling their
waste
then
,they mist follow
this
because nobody
want
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to get
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punished
.
As a result
,
people
will more aware
about
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their
waste
for recycling and the amount of recycling will be increased. In conclusion,if the
government
take some legal actions for recycling
then
more
people
will aware
about
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their ws and
this
will help the
government
to encourage
people
to recycle more.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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