Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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say that the amount of
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recycle
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from home is not enough.They
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the
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should take some legal steps
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encourage
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people
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.I think that
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only the laws can make
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more aware of their
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with,when the authority
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some rules
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folks will more responsible
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their
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it is their responsibility to recycle more
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their duty to recycle
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.A prime example is Japan, where
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must have to recycle their
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because the authority has some strict rules about recycling.So,when the
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put few regulations on recycling,
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people
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will take
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as their duty which will help the state authority to encourage
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to recycle. Another point to consider is,if the
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take some legal steps
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every individual of that nation must have to maintain,
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they will get punished.
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,every law has some rules and when a
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break the rule
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he will
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then
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punished
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,
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will more aware
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their
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for recycling and the amount of recycling will be increased. In conclusion,if the
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take some legal actions for recycling
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more
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will aware
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their ws and
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will help the
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to encourage
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to recycle more.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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