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It is suggested that young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the young people?

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It is proposed that the young
generation
 should do some charity
work
 to help
people
 in
society
. I opine it will be more beneficial than disadvantageous with following reasons in the succeeding paragraphs. On one hand, young
people
 doing
such
 unpaid
work
 has a lot of merits.
First
 and foremost, it will develop the human values in the young
generation
. By helping
people
 in the community, young
people
 will do some good in their
time
instead
 of wasting
time
 on social media and spreading negativity.
Moreover
, assisting the problems of others without any expectations will develop a sense of responsibility towards
society
 in the young
generation
.
Last
 but not the least, youngsters participating in charity
work
 will eventually aid the government in their development plans of the country.
On the other hand
, considering the disadvantages, young
people
 doing unpaid
work
 will consume their premium
time
 for nothing which in turn leads to wastage of
time
. As young
people
 are the future, doing free of cost
work
 leads some of them to think they are not worth it, which eventually leading to a depressed state.
Consequently
, the happiness rating of that group of
society
 decreases. To conclude, the merits of helping community
people
 without any pay overpowers the demerits of the same. As the
society
 can benefit from charity
work
 done by young
people
 as they are fresh workforce and demerits can be reduced if proper care of young
generation
 will be taken.
Thus
, the government should bring some schemes in which young
people
 can volunteer and do some good for
society
.
Submitted by Kashish Bhatia on

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