Some people believe that parents should limit their children hours of watching tv and playing computer games, but encourage to read books. Do you agree or disagree
Parentage restrictions play a vital role in every child's life. Is it beneficial to restrict them
in
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at
thier
early age? There are those who Correct your spelling
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claims
that it is fruitful to Change the verb form
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kids life to restraint from watching TV and playing video games. Correct your spelling
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, opponents disagree with above
statement and opine that they should find Add an article
the above
other alternative
as reading Change the wording
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other alternatives
book
and Add an article
a book
the book
also
motivate them to read it
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this
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activity is better for them?
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modern era , parents are more concern
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toddlers daily routine work and set up Correct your spelling
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limit
for them. Add an article
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the limit
For example
, study time , playing video , watching small screen etc. but it has some consequences young children become more aggressive and stubborn As a result
they will not concentrate to
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on
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studies.
Nowadays, there are other alternative available Correct your spelling
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such
as reading inspiration story book
which is specifically made for little ones. Correct your spelling
storybook
Thier
nurtures should motivate them for it Correct your spelling
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This
instead
of spend
much time on Change the verb form
spending
worth
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worthless
less
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For instance
, it will help them to gaining
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in
particular
language, vocabulary , reading, etc. Add an article
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Moreover
, reading different
kind of storytelling books help them to learn about other countries traditions and culture and Change the article
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also
encourage them to explore new places .they will become more
responsible and knowledgeable person.
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Although
watching TV and playing stations are source
of entertainment for young children, but restricted by their nurtures make them stubborn. So , In my point of Add an article
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view
their guardians should motivate them since Add a comma
,view
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childhood so that they will learn the importance of reading books in Correct your spelling
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