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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world, Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#countries #people #products #world #development
With the introduction to modern
science
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 our
world
 is united and countries are at
pace
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peace
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 with each other growing in every aspect. The
competetiveness
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competitiveness
 is leading nations towards globalisation and
people
at
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in
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 different parts of the
world
 are able to purchase similar products. I believe
this
 global revolution is a boon to all underdeveloped and developing nations. I would like to support my belief by providing arguments in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, I would like to put forward the role of E-commerce in today's digital
world
 and how is it impacting our daily lives. Oh! they are creating magic. Amazon, Flipkart and many other
oraganisations
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organisations
organizations
 have made it possible to reach different deep corners of the
world
 to deliver various products.
People
 all across the globe can
access
 these platforms through
internet
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 and can order via just a single click.
Lastest
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 merchandise is now released worldwide on a large platform and everyone having
access
 to
internet
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 and social media is aware of each activity happening at different latitudes and longitudes.
Furthermore
,
people
 are migrating overseas for higher education and better exposure. To experience various cultures and trying different cuisines which are part of their local food is so relishing but not to forget the
home sickness
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 which arises after a period of time. Don't we crave
for
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our local cuisines?
This
 helped us to create space for our ethnicity and things
at
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 a different place.
Hence
,
people
 feel homely and comfortable as they have many things
common
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in common
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frm
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from
 their hometown. In the
end
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 I would conclude that
with
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the expansion of technology and
access
 to all the products
at
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in
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 different parts of the
world
 will lead to a better life and
people
 will be unified across cultures having
access
 to all the things available.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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