In Some Countries young people are encourage to work for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

Education

helps to earn a livelihood and fight for basic rights. In some

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younger people

are motivate

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to work just after finishing their high school

studies

for

whole

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year before starting university study. The following paragraphs will discuss

pros

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and cons of doing so. On the one hand, there are many major benefits of doing

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between high school and

third level

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studies

.

Firstly

education

at the university level is expensive than

high

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schools,

hence

the younger youth wants to earn or save

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money before start

studies

. It will be

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beneficial

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for them in the sense of paying tuition fees, living cost, and accommodation so that they only focus on study.

Secondly

, it might be avoiding financial struggle hardships which they face in

part time

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job if they work during their

studies

.

On the other hand

, if a year gap would be

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advantageous

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it has

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side too which are explained

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. Surprisingly, many pupils are getting used to working who do not want to return to academic life after 12 months.

Consequently

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this

short term view

course

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them to bypass university

education

and they will

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toward lesser paid jobs.

Additionally

, they are deprived of better opportunities which are actually suitable for that, because

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of

degree level

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education

.

For instance

, a survey by the government in Britain noted that 26% student who takes a one year gap after their high school

studies

they never enter the tertiary

education

. In conclusion, it can be said that the most worthy steps for

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is

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taking a 12 months gap because it will make them physically and mentally stable in their life. It not only makes them independent but

also

makes

serious

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them serious

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about their

studies

and they work hard on it.