Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

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Technology is part of every aspect of our lives. From the

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smart phone

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that

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us up to the expeditions to Mars, it is

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. The education environment wouldn´t be different. Some people even think that classroom teachers would be

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of classroom teachers, but not complete substitution. I believe that there are two main reasons for that.

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, social interaction and

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are crucial for the learning process. Since the day we were born, we learn

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to face,

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interaction.

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, from the teacher's perspective, it is important to

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every individual in order to understand the best teaching

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for each student,

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for early childhood education.

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on classroom teaching. To conclude,

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interaction. Especially when considering the use of technology in education, the

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really hard to substitute. For some

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that might be a complete substitution but for

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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