Some people say that historical buildings should be knocked down while others say that they should be preserved. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every country has historical

buildings

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that illustrate their ancestor's stories.

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, the public thinks that those

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are not supposed to be preserved and should be demolished.

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idea

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has contra from others, who want to keep the historical walls. Each view has its own perspective and I will discuss these ideas in the below paragraphs. Many old

buildings

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have been built for many years and it made the building's life span

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getting old. The basic foundation and its soil are getting weaker

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can harm other surroundings. In order to prevent the walls

to decay

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, the

buildings

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should be demolished and rebuilt with strong materials that will

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more than decades.

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, it is reasonable to demolish the site for security objectives.

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, others think that the historical

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should be preserved as an appreciation to their heroes. The

buildings

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can become educational centres and amusement sites from

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. These benefits are not only for the

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themselves but

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for the government.

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,

people

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will be more appreciative of their elders who fought for their countries

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remembering their past efforts.

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, the government can

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from the existence of these walls. They can revamp the historical spots to be museum centres that can be visited by students or scholars.

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, the places

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invite

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from other countries to enjoy and learn the countries' history.

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, an old building of Bank Indonesia has been

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as a museum for some years and has been visited by students and tourists.

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, it generates more benefits for all sides, especially in tourism.

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, the historical

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should be taken care of by the

authority

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and the

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despite the age reasons. For

buildings

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that have shown

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, the government should renew and

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to avoid construction

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. The new brand

buildings

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can be entertainment places for

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themselves or

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guests from other places.