Space travel has been possible for some time and some people say that space tourism will be developed in the future. What do you think space travel is positive or negative a development?

Space

travel has been increasing for the

last

five decades.

This

exploration gives more information about outer

space

. It is often argued issue whether

this

kind of spacecraft is effective, negative improvements. I strongly believe

this

trend brings more optimism rather than negatives. I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with,

the

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space

study gives

more

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data

to

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us

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such

as

solar

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the solar

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system process, galaxies and

universe

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and

this

is the best way to

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and understand

about

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outer

space

. Our earth

planet

already has overpopulation repercussion, our earth

planet

resources are running out ergo, we should need another

planet

for living purpose

as well as

need rare minerals and raw materials from

space

.

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, The USA, China and Russia these countries already

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to spacecraft and travel. Ergo,

this

exploration is salient one is now situated.

Moreover

, these kinds of travel certainly bring more advantages to people

as well as

science. Undoubtedly

this

is an adventure trip because anytime anything happens even though our astronauts take more risk and hazard to us.

Space

trip

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can change our day-to-day life and we just need to find another

planet

for all creatures owing to Global warming.

For example

, many developed nations have invested a massive amount of money

for

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space

study

purpose

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as a result

, they can send a rocket,

satellite

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,

human

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and

robot

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for the research-based.

To conclude

, irrefutably

space

trip can give more benefits and advancement to us ergo, we can know about our universe, galaxy and solar. I think

this

is the best

breakthroughs

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for scientific advancements and society. I hope

this

trend is conducive for the next generations.