Many parents today do not spend much time with their children. Why is this? Does this affect parents or children more?
In the contemporary world, there is an issue that
parents
barely spend any Use synonyms
time
with their Use synonyms
offsprings
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This
can be attributed to their increasingly demanding professional lives and obligations to provide all the comforts to their families. Undoubtedly, in comparison to adults, Linking Words
children
are negatively affected to a much larger extent Use synonyms
due to
the impact on their psyche and behaviour.
Nowadays, the foremost reason causing many modern-day Linking Words
parents
to neglect to Use synonyms
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quality Change the verb form
spend
time
with their Use synonyms
children
is their financial burden of ensuring the family's prosperity. Use synonyms
This
liability to provide a stable source of finance or to make ends meet forces both Linking Words
parents
to not only work full-Use synonyms
time
but even take on extra hours on weekends. Use synonyms
Consequently
, being induced to labour day and night, Linking Words
parents
do not have enough Use synonyms
time
to bond and engage with their Use synonyms
offsprings
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offspring
however
, even if they did, they probably would be exhausted and stressed to do so. Linking Words
According to
the survey among Linking Words
parents
in North America, Use synonyms
for example
, three-quarters of participants have attested that their professional lives and financial responsibilities constrain them from spending much Linking Words
time
with their Use synonyms
children
.
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This
parental tendency of neglecting to spend Linking Words
time
with Use synonyms
children
primarily impacts their Use synonyms
offsprings
causing emotional distress and Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
behavioral
problems. Change the spelling
behavioural
This
is because Linking Words
children
who lack parental attention are likely to feel emotionally neglected which can lead to lower self-esteem and antisocial or even aggressive behaviors. Use synonyms
Moreover
, without parent’s attention and supervision, Linking Words
children
will Use synonyms
also
be very likely to take on bad habits, be it an addiction to games or smoking. Having conducted a study, Linking Words
for instance
, researchers have revealed that almost 70% of teenagers with depression and Linking Words
behavioral
issues statistically spend roughly three times less Change the spelling
behavioural
time
with their Use synonyms
parents
than their peers without any emotional distress.
In conclusion, modern-day Use synonyms
parents
fail to spend quality Use synonyms
time
with their Use synonyms
children
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due to
their financial responsibilities and highly demanding jobs. Linking Words
As a result
, affected to a larger extent than adults, not only do Linking Words
children
develop various emotional issues, but they Use synonyms
also
can suffer from behavioural problems.Linking Words
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