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Choose a person in your extended family who is your idol. Write his or her biography. Include how he or she has inspired you.

#person #idol #biography
Most of the people may have an idol or who’s inspired them to do something ,but if we talk about a
person
 in our family we will have one
person
 that makes us proud of him or she and
this
 kind of people may make us
to
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do something like them because they may
inspiration
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 us to do something like them. If we talk about the
person
 in our family that inspired us or we should he or she to be our idol,
this
 why I
also
 have one
person
 in my family that makes me
to
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be like her
that is
 my mom, she is the
person
 that I have expected her. She is a
person
 that very strong of her mind because when she does something
that is
 very hard
to
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 her but
this
 thing did not make her
to
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stop doing it she still tries to do
this
 thing until she finished.
This
why
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 my mom makes me
to
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be like her because she makes me to strong and makes me
to
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depend
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 myself like her,
for instance
 when I have something
that is
 very hard
to
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 me I will try until it has done like now that I have tried to do
this
 essay
that is
 very hard to me because my grammar is very bad but I still try to do it until I’m successful.
Finally
,
this
 is good things if we have expected
on
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someone in our family that makes us
to
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be good like he or she because if we have someone that
inspiration
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 us, it can make us
successes
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 with the thing that we want to do like our idol.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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