Choose a person in your extended family who is your idol. Write his or her biography. Include how he or she has inspired you.
Most people may have an idol or who’s inspired them to do something ,but if we talk about a
person
in our family we will have one Use synonyms
person
that makes us proud of him or she and Use synonyms
this
kind of people may make us do something like them because they may inspire us to do something like them.
If we talk about the Linking Words
person
in our family that inspired us or we should he or she to be our idol, Use synonyms
this
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have one Linking Words
person
in my family that makes me be like her Use synonyms
that is
my mom, she is the Linking Words
person
that I have expected her. She is a Use synonyms
person
that very strong in her mind because when she does something Use synonyms
that is
very hard for her but Linking Words
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thing did not make her stop doing it she still tries to do Linking Words
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thing until she finished. Linking Words
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way my mom makes me be like her because she makes me to strong and makes me Linking Words
depend
myself like her, Add the preposition
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this
essay Linking Words
that is
very hard to me because my grammar is very bad but I still try to do it until I’m successful.
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is good things if we have expected someone in our family that makes us be good like he or she because if we have someone that inspired us, it can make us succeed with the thing that we want to do like our idol.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite