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Governments should spend less money on restoring old buildings and more money for new housing and roads development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Municipalities prefer to invest in fresh
houses
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 and road refurbishment, in order to spend less money on repairing old
buildings
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 in cities. I totally agree with
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 statement for some reasons. The reason why I advocate
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 view is that investing in new
houses
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 and roads is favourable for the
government
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. To be more specific, despite of the population who live in old
houses
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 faces difficulties, these
buildings
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 are repaired at least a once year, and the
government
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 undertakes to spend on overhead costs.
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, it is cheaper and more convenient to do than trying to revamp
buildings
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 whose designs may be outdated.
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, the majority of people who live in old
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 are moved and insured with new residents by the authorities every year in Baku city of Azerbaijan. Another point to consider is that
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 a lot of old
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 are repaired on time, these
houses
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 are not tolerant, and it can create risks for the population and the environment every time.
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 disaster happens, millions of individuals may lose their lives because of old and impatient
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.
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, during the earthquake,
buildings
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 collapsed and people were buried under the rubble in Turkey.
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, municipalities try to invest more in building fresh
buildings
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 and new pathways, it is safe for people. In conclusion, these multifaceted reasons show that the
government
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 should spend more money on fresh
houses
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 and roads than repairing old
buildings
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, whose it is more suitable for both residents and the
government
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.
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