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The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social resources. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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In recent years, Awareness about current criminal issues has significantly increased.
This
 has led to sources like social
media
, news channels et cetera, competing for more views.
Besides
, some publishers take a step
further
 to provide
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 investigation to attract more viewers.
Hence
, we have an ongoing debate, while some believe it is vital for
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society to know the complete details,
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others argue that
,
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 in-dept information can escalate these crimes. I completely agree that
such
 forms of
media
 should be strictly regulated by
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government
 authorities and we will discuss
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some benefits in doing so, in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, When
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media
 discloses the details of a suspect or a criminal, the family members are at a huge risk of being invaded of their privacy. Sometimes, people even try to question the family members while
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others may even try to blame them.
This
 leads to unnecessary hatred towards the relatives in
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society.
For example
, In India, parents of a murder victim were constantly being questioned by the
media
 in midst of a shocking moment they went through after hearing the news.
On the other hand
, detailed news can undeniably help the society from avoiding various threats present but,
this
 could backfire by more serious underlying issues of
such
 resources, by providing new ideas on how
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 new crimes.
Additionally
, It will
also
 help other criminals to mimick the crime without being caught. To conclude, though
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 to information is one of the essential rights to mankind, it is
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absolutely
 necessary to classify certain sensitive matters and censor these from reaching
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the public as it may cause more harm
besides
, encouraging more
such
 ill-activities in the country.
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