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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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People
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 attend colleges or
Univeristy
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University
 to have higher education and degree.
Ofcourse
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Of course
, not only that if we attend for improving our skills, to know and have a social status and
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 to know about diverse cultures. Some
people
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 go to educational institutions and
univeristies
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universities
 to attend or know about job opportunities and to improve themselves.
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, It's a type of hub where there is diverse cultures, backgrounds, religions, come together and shares
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 other to know more. Most
people
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 attend colleges to increase
knowlegde
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knowledge
 and many peoples attend college and universities for career preparation, In colleges and
univeristies
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universities
,
people
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 (or student is suitable I think) have new
expereices
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experiences
, which is necessary to have it in
everyones
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everyone's
liife
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life
. For many like me, It's the
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 time to stay away from home and live alone or with strangers.
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 experience
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 to take care
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, to develops
friendy
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friendly
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 nature and the care of others.
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