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An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

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Nowadays youngsters are more addicted
towards
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 junk foods & carbonated drinks. Which has led to
number
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 of overweight.
This
 essay will deal with the main factor of excessive body fat & some feasible solution. Unhealthy
food
 will lead to serious health problem. In
this
 fast life both the parents are working & they do not have time to cook
hygenic
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hygienic
Hygenic
 foods so they often buy
food
 from outside. Restaurants sell tasty
food
 which
contain
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 unhealthy ingredients.
Also
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children
 do not give time for outdoor activities. They are engaged in seeing television, playing games etc. because of that
children
 become
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overweight
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over weight
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overweight
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.
This
effects
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affects
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 health problem
such
 as heart disease, high blood pressure, fatigue etc. Primary care provider. Parents should take
first
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 step by providing homemade healthy foods. So that they will get proteins, minerals, vitamins to their bodies. Parents & teachers should encourage their
children
 to do exercises, yoga etc. In the
family
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 they should follow fix
time table
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timetable
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 for eating
food
. So, it will help them to maintain their body. To conclude it is
an
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evident
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 that obesity causes several problems among
children
. So, to reduce that
children
 should maintain balanced diet & society should take prevention to deteriorate
this
 problem
further
.
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