Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others ay that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give the reasons for your answer and include ant relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Whether or not losing some species of
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is the main environmental issue is the topic of interest. While, many think that the extinction of some past species is the main problem, others mention that there
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something more essential affecting our environment.
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conclusion is reached. On the one hand, in the
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there are much more species than nowadays, while, now numbers of them become extinct. Not only
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extinction is considered, but
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loads of
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are currently
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risk of endanger.
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, these problems result in an unbalanced nature which may cause thousands of unexpected results. To elaborate more about
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is that some unmoral hunters hunt for some
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to take just one part of them or overuse some
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for human's needs.
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, numbers of rhinos are poached for just taking away their horns which are valuable in dark markets or the overuse of some herbal
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for making medicine can lead to endangering ad extinction.
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, there are other environmental concerns that are more crucial.
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, deforestation, cutting down trees to appeal to human's demands
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as constructing resorts or activities facilities.
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action will not kill just one animal or plant, though it means demolishing all of their habitat to live and all wildlife will have no places to live.
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, the human did not only ruin
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and
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, but they
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ruin themselves.
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, climate change affects both the north and south poles by it melts the ice where it is a home for polar bears and penguins.
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, there is
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an effect the mankind that the temperature of our world increase and it is much harder to manage to live in the hot weather. In conclusion, from the mentioned perspectives above, I personally agree with the latter, due to the fact that there are more environmental problems that result
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not only in
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and
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humankind and our own planet.
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