Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Finding ways to improve educational quality is often one of the top priorities in every country. While some believed that
students
should have the option to give opinions and feedback on their teacher, others feel that this
will negatively impact the education system. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I agree that adolescents should not be encouraged to evaluate their teachers
.
Those who support the concept of evaluation done by students
feel that this
may improve educational quality. In many cases, the level of comprehension of students
relies not on the content of the lesson but on the way teachers
conduct it. If, for example
, the class is slow, it will be ineffective for teachers
to teach too fast so that most students
fail to retain the information. Indeed, if learners did not give comments, it would have become arduous to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class or not. Ultimately, this
feedback will improve the quality of studies and teaching methods.
Despite these arguments, others, myself included, feel that such
criticism and feedback will adversely affect the atmosphere in the classroom. Certainly, teachers
can be vulnerable to the negative words of students
, and the classroom may be in chaos due to the massive number of comments. As a result
, the student-teacher relationship would get disturbed, and their emotional bonding will become weak. Furthermore
, such
an atmosphere would be impractical for teachers
to work out a teaching method that can satisfy all students
, and they will pay less attention and care in the classroom. Overall, this
could affect studies and the whole education system.
In conclusion, this
essay discussed reasons why some people support teachers
' assessment by students
and others oppose. In my view, criticism is not a solution for implementing a proper education system. Instead
, we should find other solutions to tackle the problem.Submitted by chavanpranay1994 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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