the government should lower the bughet on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To extend do you agree?

Authorities ought to limit the funding on the arts in order to increase the budget in the field of education. I totally agree with

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idea because

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increase the percentage of educated professionals in society and

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plays a major role in the development of a nation.

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with, the rate of education particularly in town and cities are gradually increased ,

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is because the government spend more money on the educational system.

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,there are people who argue that an equal amount of funding should be done for art,which essential for society.

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argument is valid to a limited extend.More often

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kind of investment for learning can improve the employment opportunities for highly educated professionals.There was a recent example of a country which invested in students ten years back,has become a successful sate in terms of education and in the field of job opportunities.

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type of investing can boost the economy of the country.if a nation has a significant number of educational professionals,

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it attracts other multinational companies to set their branch in that state or country.if they are doing

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,

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the nation gets loads of income from the company and from employees in the form of tax.On top of that,

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bring advanced technology into society and most individuals get access to that.

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,now it is seen in Hyderabad city that more people are using highly advanced technology,

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only because of the assistance from authorities at the early stage of schooling ,

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,the government main agenda is to maximise the fund for schools and colleges. In conclusion,Even though,art is a form that conveys the intention of an artist,

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is not as imperative as learning.So,strongly agree that the highest fund ought to be allocated for educational establishments.