what are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career?
People
need to sample various kinds of job spheres in order to change their lifestyle or to ladder up
their career. Add the preposition
toup
This
development is always a common sence
which does not surprise anybody. Correct your spelling
sense
scene
However
, altering work conditions and start from scratch has its pros and cons which will be illustrated in this
essay.
To begin
with,one is significant
advantage is that it can be their status. As they intend to get Add an article
a significant
the significant
high
position in their Add an article
a high
workplacement
, they are not given Correct your spelling
work placement
this
opportunity. For example
, a large company which is employeed
a Correct your spelling
employed
lot
workers neglect hardworking ones ,and Add the preposition
oflot
then
they fed up with this
conditions. Correct determiner usage
these
Finally
, they make a decision to abandon this
occupation and prefer another one what
Correct pronoun usage
that
satisfy
them.Change the verb form
satisfies
Besides
, one of the significant benefit
is that they take into account commuting between work and home. As there is a Change to a plural noun
benefits
long distance
, they try to find near work location.
Add a hyphen
long-distance
On the other hand
, people
when change
their career they lose touch with their old colleagues and start from Change the verb form
changing
foundation
as they Add an article
the foundation
a foundation
pracitice
for a short period. For these Correct your spelling
practice
reasons
they challenge a lot.Add a comma
,reasons
For
instance
they should get new experiences and Add a comma
,instance
this
task is always hard. If they are easy-catcher , they will adapt
Correct your spelling
adopt
new
environment. Change preposition
to new
Consequently
, it will take them a long period to adopt new regulations and partners. If they are patience
, they gain successes Replace the word
patient
what
they dream.
In conclusion, Change preposition
over what
people
almost always try to taste different things as new life skills and mix with new people
. Despite the fact that they enjoy and feel happier with these alterations, they face with
difficulties before adaptation.Change preposition
apply
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