what are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career?

People
need to sample various kinds of job spheres in order to change their lifestyle or to ladder
up
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their career.
This
development is always a common
sence
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sense
scene
which does not surprise anybody.
However
, altering work conditions and start from scratch has its pros and cons which will be illustrated in
this
essay.
To begin
with,one is
significant
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advantage is that it can be their status. As they intend to get
high
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position in their
workplacement
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work placement
, they are not given
this
opportunity.
For example
, a large company which is
employeed
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employed
a
lot
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workers neglect hardworking ones ,and
then
they fed up with
this
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conditions.
Finally
, they make a decision to abandon
this
occupation and prefer another one
what
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satisfy
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them.
Besides
, one of the significant
benefit
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is that they take into account commuting between work and home. As there is a
long distance
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, they try to find near work location.
On the other hand
,
people
when
change
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their career they lose touch with their old colleagues and start from
foundation
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as they
pracitice
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practice
for a short period. For these
reasons
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they challenge a lot.
For
instance
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they should get new experiences and
this
task is always hard. If they are easy-catcher , they will
adapt
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new
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environment.
Consequently
, it will take them a long period to adopt new regulations and partners. If they are
patience
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, they gain successes
what
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they dream. In conclusion,
people
almost always try to taste different things as new life skills and mix with new
people
. Despite the fact that they enjoy and feel happier with these alterations, they face
with
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difficulties before adaptation.
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