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many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the Countryside. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#city #life #countryside
Modern time has witnessed progress in the field of Urbanization. In the current era, people more like to live in a city because they think that city life provides many opportunities as compare to rural life but I agree with the statement up to some extent on the account of the innumerous reason that will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraph.
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city
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 we have greater Job opportunities as cities are more developed area. people get higher pay rate that enhances their standard of living. For ,instance In the Recent report of urbanization, showed that 85 per cent student comes to developed areas to pursue their career and get the better
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 style that rural life usually does not offer.
Additionally
 Transport and medical services easily available in urban areas. In there we can take any mode of transportation to reach the destination and for medical services, we can call ambulance services.
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, the gym and yoga classes help them to keep the body fit and away from normal diseases.
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 and noise-free atmosphere of rural area, Increases the chances of more living because we have access to fresh vegetables and fruits and we live in a green environment and keep ours away from the doctor.
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, it is easy for us to get together in countryside areas. In conclusion, the crux of all the points of leads to that cities offers the good possibility that tends to best lifestyles and standard of living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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