Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them Other people believe it's goods to have friend who sometime disagree with them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
like having
friends
with similar
interest
, while others believe having a
friend
with a different opinion is good. In
this
,essay both argument
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will be thoroughly analyzed and discussed before dr Concl drawing a reasoned conclusion. On one hand, when we have a
friend
with a similar
interest
, the chances of conflict reduces. For ,example
friend
haring an apartment have the same ,
interest
they will watch football math together or play a video game on television. They won't fight for television. Since they share a common
interest
they will do anything together and avoid any conflict.
Further
having similar
interest
allows after completing high school,
friends
college with identical subjects.
Therefore
this
will help them to stay together.
On the other hand
, when we make
friends
with different
interest
, it generates new
ideas
and improves creativity. To illustrate, when
people
with different
ideas
sit together, they can discuss all the
ideas
and choose the best idea. In any business meeting when
people
with different
ideas
come together, they
finally
agree on the best possible idea.
Thus
people
with different
ideas
come up with more Creative and new conclusion. In conclusion, having a
friend
with similar opinion reduces conflict ,
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friends
having different
ideas
are more creative In my opinion having
friends
with different
ideas
have more advantage compared to having a
friend
with identical
ideas
.
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