Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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opine that crucial positions in the government are inappropriate for the young, while some oppose that letting

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take on the positions might be a wise decision. In

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essay, I will attempt to justify both arguments as well as to provide my perspective which supports the latter.

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, it is necessary for the state machine to be gradually changed in terms of the way it works to catch up with the times by enacting new laws and policies, and

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cannot be done without the appearance of young

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– who have their mind updated with the development of the society.

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, they might have new viewpoints on social problems, which enables them got

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the appropriate solutions,

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to the old

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, who are likely to resolve issues in an old, rigid, and less effective way.

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, the environment is in danger due to the unconsciousness of

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, the old methods of propagandizing the environmental protection policies through televisions or leaflets show fewer practical impacts than interesting and creative campaigns organised by young celebrities and influencers.

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, even though the

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can come up with new ideas which are really necessary for solving outstanding social problems, they may not be experienced enough like the old

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to successfully handle these issues.

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, they might have to struggle while trying to practically apply those new ideas to society, and if they are successful, they might

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have to bear with the objectivism of several citizens who are accustomed to the old policies and laws. Whereas the old

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may handle

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issue well as they are a part of the government system for a long time, and they

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have enough prestige and trust of

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to solve numerous serious social problems. In conclusion, it seems to me that

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the experience is required to work efficiently, I believe that there are certain areas where

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will deliver better performance.

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,

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should be given a chance and they should be promoted.