Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I totally agree with the statement,

Media

is playing an important role in every sector and our

society

. Nowadays, we are following multiple

news

channels to up to date our self with current affairs. I am gonna

discussed

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few

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a few

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points about the

media

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media's

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crucial role in

society

and how it impacts everyone's lives.

To begin

with,

Media

is the backbone

for

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every country and

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the sources

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sources

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source

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of the information they

are showing

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show

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on their channels about the day to day lives like what problems are going on within the world or emergencies and present in a negative way.

Then

this

will harm

society

Apart from

this

, the majority of

people

, think

this

is genuine information even negative

news

. If

media

is showing. If

media

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the media

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will

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apply

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show only negative

stories

about

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the country

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country

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country's

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problems. Definitely,

this

type of

news

harm

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harms

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the country.

For example

Covid-19

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COVID-19

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cases are increasing

with

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high speed in India and the Indian government is not taking any serious

step

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steps

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towards the virus and not thinking about the

nation

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nation's

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people

This

shows the administration is not doing anything to control the virus and save

people

's lives. These unmotivated

stories

will impact everyone's life and

society

On the other hand

, If

media

will show

the

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apply

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positive

stories

on their channels and other platforms.

This

will increase the

people

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people's

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confidence towards the nation and they think good things are

also

happening around the world apart from the bad

stories

For Instance

, If they show in the

Covid-19

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COVID-19

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situation, All the nations come together and find

the

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solution

how

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apply

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to protect our citizens from

this

deadly virus. Few free services were launched by the government to help you

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with

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Covid-19.

This

type of

news

will give a good impression on

individually

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individuals

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and towards

society

. In Conclusion, both the parameters are very crucial to develop a nation and

media

is the key part of

this

story. So, If

media

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the media

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focus

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focuses

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equally on both sides.

Then

, It will create a balance in our

society

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task response

Your essay demonstrates a clear understanding of the topic, but there are several areas that require improvement in order to address the task fully.

coherence and cohesion

There is a need to improve coherence and cohesion with a focus on organizing the ideas in a more logical and structured manner. Additionally, a stronger introduction and conclusion are needed to better frame the essay.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

329 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pessimistic outlook
exposed to negative news
stress and anxiety
success stories
balanced reporting
well-informed public
rational decisions
sense of helplessness
apathy
skew public perception
mistrust in institutions
enhance well-being
mental health
manipulate public opinion
serve specific agendas

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