Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I totally agree with the statement,

Media

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is playing an important role in every sector and our

society

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. Nowadays, we are following multiple

news

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channels to up to date our self with current affairs. I am gonna

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few

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points about the

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media

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crucial role in

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and how it impacts everyone's lives.

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with,

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is the backbone

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every country and

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sources

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of the information they

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on their channels about the day to day lives like what problems are going on within the world or emergencies and present in a negative way.

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this

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will harm

society

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, the majority of

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, think

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is genuine information even negative

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. If

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is showing. If

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media

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the media

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will

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show only negative

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about

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the country

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country

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problems. Definitely,

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type of

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harm

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the country.

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Covid-19

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cases are increasing

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high speed in India and the Indian government is not taking any serious

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steps

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towards the virus and not thinking about the

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people

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shows the administration is not doing anything to control the virus and save

people

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's lives. These unmotivated

stories

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will impact everyone's life and

society

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, If

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will show

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apply

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positive

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on their channels and other platforms.

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will increase the

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people

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confidence towards the nation and they think good things are

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happening around the world apart from the bad

stories

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, If they show in the

Covid-19

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COVID-19

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situation, All the nations come together and find

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solution

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to protect our citizens from

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deadly virus. Few free services were launched by the government to help you

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Covid-19.

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type of

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will give a good impression on

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and towards

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. In Conclusion, both the parameters are very crucial to develop a nation and

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is the key part of

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story. So, If

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media

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the media

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focus

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equally on both sides.

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, It will create a balance in our

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Your essay demonstrates a clear understanding of the topic, but there are several areas that require improvement in order to address the task fully.

coherence and cohesion

There is a need to improve coherence and cohesion with a focus on organizing the ideas in a more logical and structured manner. Additionally, a stronger introduction and conclusion are needed to better frame the essay.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

329 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pessimistic outlook
exposed to negative news
stress and anxiety
success stories
balanced reporting
well-informed public
rational decisions
sense of helplessness
apathy
skew public perception
mistrust in institutions
enhance well-being
mental health
manipulate public opinion
serve specific agendas

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