In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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some
people
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believe reading newspaper or book contents online results in some disadvantages, it seems to me that the availability of newspaper or book contents online can lead to many profits. I feel
this
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way for two reasons electronic hardware
advances
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and
internet
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advances
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.
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with, nowadays, electronic and computer hardware
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lead to
people
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are more willing to use electronic education these days.
As a result
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of industrial
advances
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, many companies were forced to increase the quality and efficiency of their products;
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point
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in small and fast mobile phones and e-book readers.
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,
people
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can save many pdf files in own devices and carry out and read that any time. So, using electronic devices for reading books or newspapers gain much popularity among
people
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.
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but not least, considering many
advances
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internet
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grow up many fast, especially in speed parameters. Regarding the
internet
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to raise public awareness of
people
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about the news. So a user can easily find any news or any electrical books on the
internet
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for reading, and every moment these kinds of
sources
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update and share on the
internet
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for public users.
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, from an economic perspective, increasing electrical
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usage
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of paper-based
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not only can lead to saving the environment in safety condition but
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can decrease cost for buying physical
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. To sum up, in the near future electrical
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place
instead
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of paper-based because of references, electronic hardware
advances
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, and
internet
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advances
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. Because if we use paper-based
sources
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can result in some disadvantages on the environment and
people
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economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital technology
  • e-books
  • online articles
  • environmental degradation
  • deforestation
  • cost-effectiveness
  • consumer preferences
  • multimedia
  • interactive features
  • publishing industries
  • reliability
  • credibility
  • tactile experience
  • printed materials
  • digital content
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