Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: ■ introduce yourself * explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about the noise pollution that has been continuing since last
week at night.
My name is Dhruvi and I live in Queens Street. I am a physiotherapist and have been working in a Hospital for the last
five years and due to
that it is crucial to maintain a good sleep cycle. However
, I cannot do that because of ongoing repair work on the street.
The trouble is very obvious and recognized by several society members as well. Hence
, the maintenance work has been done during the night. It causes a disturbance, and eventually, I cannot sleep appropriately and feel uneasy the next morning.
It is my humble request to the authorities that they please cease such
activities at midnight, despite the same thing can be continued during that time as the majority are off to their work during the day.
Hoping for your prompt response,
Yours faithfully,
DkpSubmitted by pateldhruvi038 on
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task achievement
To improve task achievement, provide more specific details about the disturbances and how they affect you and your neighbors' daily routines.
coherence and cohesion
For better coherence and cohesion, you could start a new paragraph when discussing the problem's impact on the community to separate it more clearly from the introduction and your personal experience.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, which is suitable for a complaint to the local council.
coherence and cohesion
Good logical structure: the letter clearly follows a three-part structure: introduction, explanation of the problem, and suggestion for solution.
coherence and cohesion
Appropriate use of greeting and closing phrases adds to the formality of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite