Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that eating fast

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in a restaurant has a variety of benefits

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since

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prefer to eat their meals immediately without wasting any

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. Contrary to

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popular belief, there are still those who argue that it is a proper habit to eat meals at

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. I am inclined to believe that eating

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at

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is a wiser option for

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.

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and foremost, the quality of

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which are prepared

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home

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is very different from the

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which are served in

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. Up to a point, when somebody wants to cook at

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, she has to buy fresh vegetables, meat and fruits with high quality for cooking the food.

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, most of the

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do not pay attention to

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point.

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, it is crystal clear that the

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people

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cook at

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are much healthier than the

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because most of the

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especially fast

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are cooked with a lot of oil and causes various diseases like obesity and cancer.

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home cooked

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consist of nutrients

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as vitamin C,

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and protein. Another significant fact which should be taken into consideration is that eating

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at

home

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can gather family

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together in each

meal

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mealtime

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. In

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century,

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of

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spend most of their

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with laptops, cellphones and tablets,

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of spending

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with friends or family

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.

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,

meal times

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are really important for gathering family

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. since all the

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spend a certain amount of

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eating in a day and it is a good choice to spend

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time

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with family

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, eating at

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does not create the chance to have

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a relationship

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with family

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yet importantly, in today’s society money is a key factor for all

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., so one way to save money is avoiding eating meals at

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. When

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cook

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at

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it can be cheaper for them.

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, the cost of a cup of tea is almost twice more expensive than its main price.

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, eating at

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paves the way to save money. On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that cooking

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at

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a better option in the light of its quality, gathering family

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together and its cost.