Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save such traditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Cultural heritages play a vitally important role in society and the public

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opposite views about the usages of these heritages. Some

people

argue that making cultural sites

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a part of tourism will cause damages to these

places

.

However

, others claim that

this

is the sole method to preserve these traditions and I totally agree with them. On one hand, it is reasonable for the public to think that the more tourists visit historical

places

, the more damage they may cause. To be more specific, we must admit that not every visitor is responsible for taking caution when they are visiting one famous site and some of them even destroy them on purpose. Taking a famous Chinese style wood cabin in Beijing as an example, tons of visitors pay the entrance fee to see the extraordinary structure and valuable wood of

this

cabin.

However

, as more and more

people

are stepping on the stairs and ground of

this

cabin, which leads to irreversible damage to it due to the exceptional wood and high repair cost.

Therefore

, using cultural traditions as attractions for tourism leads to negative and detrimental effects on them.

On the other hand

, I strongly agree

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that the historical and cultural

places

should be an inevitable part of travelling, which brings benefits for culture spreading in

this

world. It is undeniable that numerous cultural activities and

places

,

such

as the languages in minorities and traditional villages, are becoming trivial for contemporary

people

. By visiting these

places

during travelling,

people

will get a better understanding of the culture and history behind them, which provides an excellent way to protect and preserve these

places

.

Moreover

, making cultural heritages famous touristic attractions supports better maintenance for them. By raising a large amount of money from tourism, the government is able to pay the extremely high maintenance fee and even employ updated technology to keep the good conditions of traditional sites. In conclusion,

although

many

people

hold the view that tourists will induce great damage to cultural traditions where will become well-known

places

, I insist that

this

is the only effective way to preserve them. By known by more

people

, these attractions can be valued as an indispensable part of the country.

Besides

, they can receive good maintenance, which promotes their existence and protection in today’s world.