Some people believe that the time spent on television and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe that this has negative effects on child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we live side to side with advanced technologies, which are invented to convenience people's lives,

such

as cell phones, the Internet, and

television

. People spend their time to ease their boredom with the Internet including

children

, who love watching their favourite shows or playing trending computer

games

. There are two opinions on

this

issue. Some think it is valuable for kids, whilst others believe that has a negative impact. I will discuss the views and give my opinion in the below paragraphs. Most people assume that

television

and

games

can harm

children

's psychology.

First

, as they are spending their most times on gaming, they have less time on social.

Therefore

, they do not have space to befriend

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others and it could impact their cognitive skill.

Second

,

children

will experience speech delay where their ability in speaking does not appear at a certain age. It happens when

children

have been influenced by technology early.

For instance

, my niece, who could not speak clearly in her mother

language

at the age of three since she has been using a smartphone since she was little. That's why

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consumption of

television

and

games

can be harmful to

children

.

Nevertheless

,

television

and

games

can

also

improve

children

's ability in speaking in other languages. Most

games

use the English

language

as their direction and current trending

children

programmes are in English.

For example

, my niece, who can speak

in

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English since she was two years old. She got it through her

games

on her smartphone and kid contents on cable tv. Since

children

are more flexible in absorbing a new

language

,

this

can be a good media to sharpen their

language

skill. In conclusion, parents cannot hide the technology

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from their

children

.

Instead

of forbidding their

children

in using both

television

and

games

, they can supervise and guide their

children

to become less addicted to consuming

television

and

games

.