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Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Due to advancements in technology and artificial intelligence nowadays,
robots
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 have been invented for the purpose of helping humans in both work and household activities. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of having Artificial intelligence. On one hand, having
robots
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 will
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 the workload in offices. In some ,companies there is daily repetitive work which makes humans mentally stressed in
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, in the manufacturing ,industry there will be a requirement to lift heavy weights in which
Robots
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 can do them easily without any physical discomfort.
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, usage of automatic machines
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 as washing machine, dishwasher and vacuum cleaner will
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 the amount of
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 that we are using for completing our daily course.
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 will give a lot of leisure
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 which in turn can be used to spend quality
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 with family and friends.
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, an increase in the number of
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 in the working environment will
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 the manpower.
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 the rate of unemployment will increase which disturbs the social economy of a country.
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, people will become lazy and will not stay physically fit. One clear example
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 is that according to a survey the percentage of obese people has been raised by 35% in the
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 is due to a
decrease
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 in physical activities. In conclusion,
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 there are many advantages like spending a great
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 with the family and reducing physical stress or pain by using these gadgets we
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 need to consider negative points like
decrease
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 in physical fitness and high risk of obesity which will emerge as a big challenge to the society in coming future.

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