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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, we have witnessed
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tremendous growth in urbanization. Space utilization in these urban areas has been a topic of debate among people. Some people believe planting trees will increase
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 environment while others argue that, building houses is a necessity for
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society.
However
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 absolutely agree that
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 of constructing more houses will outweigh the benefits. There are several advantages of planting trees in free spaces.
Besides
 providing fresh oxygen, they play a vital role in purifying the air.
Additionally
, they provide
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 breeze and shade in hot weather. Gardens and parks can help people to do exercise and yoga
thus
, relieving stress from their hectic lifestyle.
For instance
, In my
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 Thane, which is an industrial zone, the presence of the nearby forest helps to maintain the carbon levels in order to balance the ecosystem.
On the other hand
, Housing is an essential aspect
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 the increase in demand for shelters.
Although
 adequate
accomodation
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accommodation
 is important for the society,
this
 process can create more problems than solving them.
To begin
 with, from an environmental point of view, excessive construction can increase soil erosion and disrupt rainfall since it cuts down green space.
Furthermore
, due to the demand and supply for houses being disproportionate, less
availibility
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availability
 of homes can
infuence
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influence
 the number of crimes committed by the homeless. In conclusion, Though building
home
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 for living is essential, the enlargement of green space will bring prosperity to
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society. From my viewpoint, the most effective way is to balance
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