So, some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that being affluent is it provides an individual with the opportunity to support a community that
are
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below the poverty line.I partly agree with
this
idea because their nation
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spends money unnecessarily when they get income without much hard work,while some category of affluents who became economically well-off are ready to donate.
To begin
with, very few economically high-class tend to lead a high standard of life.The reason for
this
is they did not earn that income through their sweat.
For instance
, some of the young billionaires see a great deal of ease in earning income by investing in the stock market.
This
category of well-off individuals tends to buy everything that sees.On top of that,they are least bothered about the people who are destitute and disadvantaged.
Thus
, the government should impose a high tax on these individuals,
then
they will support the poor and needy.
On the other hand
, most of the individual who became a billionaire through hard work,they are ready to provide financial assistance to the society who are economically low class because these self-made affluents can understand the stage of the economically backward people.The best example of
this
is Microsoft CEO, who was a child who lived in poverty.after completion of graduation,he worked day and night to become a well-off person around the globe.
Similarly
, every person who earns billions ought to take an oath to support the disadvantaged.If they do so,by 2030 the poverty will be wiped off from
this
globe. In conclusion,
Although
there are multi-billionaires who tend to spend their money on everything that sees, still most of the hard-working affluents tend to aid society in the form of charity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wealthy
  • financial resources
  • philanthropy
  • charitable organizations
  • donations
  • fundraising
  • support
  • initiatives
  • contribute
  • fulfillment
  • purpose
  • selfless
  • altruistic
  • prioritize
  • personal gain
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