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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world, still go hungry. Why is this the cause? What can be done about this problem?

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Although
 agricultural facilities and farming methods are improved, many
people
 still do not have enough
food
 to eat. Two main reasons are financial
problems
 and climate
change
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the causes and solutions on
this
 topic.
To begin
 with, many
people
 think that a lot of
farmers
 are facing
problems
 regarding loans and weather
change
 not only
that
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 government is not helping enough
to
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farmer
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 in case of financial
problems
,
this
 directly affects the shortage of
food
.
Moreover
, in some cases when
farmers
 grow crops it destroyed due to heavy rain and bad weather.
For instance
, in the year 2019, a huge farmer protest was going on against authority to increase the loan, it shows that
farmers
 are not happy and they are facing big
problems
 to grow vegetables and all.
However
, the mentioned root causes can be resolved by taking a few preventive steps. Well, it's not easy to solve climate
change
 suddenly but if the government takes few steps to protect the environment it can help to reduce the weather
change
.
Furthermore
, higher authorities should increase agriculture loans so
farmers
 can grow more crops and
food
,
this
 will help to provide more
food
 for
people
 and no one has to sleep hungry. To recapitulate,
farmers
 are facing lots of
problems
 in agriculture and due to
this
people
 are not getting enough
food
, they go hungry.
This
 problem can only be solved by the government by offering
farmers
 proper help in agriculture.
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