Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are those who believe that
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physical
punishments work better for
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to act nicer.
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, there are those who find the way of giving
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things they want for better attitude has
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influence on
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. Well, I believe that
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improves better when they acquire rewards in the process of educating it rather than when they get
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physically
taught with pain.
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,
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punishment has a significant bad influence
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children
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, as their attitudes become more polite, only because they are afraid of getting attacked or maybe
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hurt so not because they
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, no child deserves to be
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physically
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an educational purpose. Unfortunately, in Japan, a considerable number of
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die because of
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child abuse every year and most of their guardians say that they hit the
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to teach them some lessons for better
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.
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example indicates that physical abuse to
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put them in a situation filled with fear and danger.
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, if they had chosen another way of teaching, which is rewarding them, how to act more accurate, the young precious lives would have not been lost.
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, I read an article about the most efficient way of
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children
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properly by considering the effect of it on
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them through life
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Asahi newspaper a fortnight ago. It informed that,
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to a survey by Aichi prefecture,
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had become less
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aggressive
and joined more social activities to contribute a society when they had grown up in an environment, where people around them had treated them kindly
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parents giving allowance after they help
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elderly person on a train. The reason behind
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was that they were able to learn how to be nice and care about others by being done so since they had been quite young. To sum up, for these two reasons; the
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punishment
that its influence in enormously bad and the advantage of rewarding in that
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learn it by their own experience, I strongly think that
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learn how to behave better when they get rewards.
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