Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are those who believe that

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physical

punishments work better for

children

to act nicer.

However

, there are those who find the way of giving

children

things they want for better attitude has

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influence on

children

. Well, I believe that

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improves better when they acquire rewards in the process of educating it rather than when they get

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taught with pain.

First

,

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physical

punishment has a significant bad influence

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children

, as their attitudes become more polite, only because they are afraid of getting attacked or maybe

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hurt so not because they

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Moreover

, no child deserves to be

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attacked even though

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an educational purpose. Unfortunately, in Japan, a considerable number of

children

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child abuse every year and most of their guardians say that they hit the

children

to teach them some lessons for better

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.

This

example indicates that physical abuse to

children

put them in a situation filled with fear and danger.

Also

, if they had chosen another way of teaching, which is rewarding them, how to act more accurate, the young precious lives would have not been lost.

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children

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Asahi newspaper a fortnight ago. It informed that,

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according

to a survey by Aichi prefecture,

children

had become less

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aggressive

and joined more social activities to contribute a society when they had grown up in an environment, where people around them had treated them kindly

for example

parents giving allowance after they help

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elderly person on a train. The reason behind

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was that they were able to learn how to be nice and care about others by being done so since they had been quite young. To sum up, for these two reasons; the

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that its influence in enormously bad and the advantage of rewarding in that

children

learn it by their own experience, I strongly think that

children

learn how to behave better when they get rewards.