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IN MANY COUNTRIES, SMALL SHOPS ARE CLOSING. WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT.

#countries #shops #development
The business represents an organised effort of an individual or group of individuals engaged in making a living. Advancement of technology has impacted mostly on micro seller
subsiquently
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subsequently
 forcing
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 shut their enterprise. There are
multifareous
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multifarious
 reasons why small enterprises winding up
such
 as
compititive
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competitive
 price and constraint in stocking the variety of products. I
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propound
profound
proud
 that it is
advantageous
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process
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 for the development of a country. One of the
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principal
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principle
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 cause of
diminishing
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the diminishing
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 of sole traders is
liberalization
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the liberalization
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 of
economy
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the economy
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 and foreign investment. To gain
customer
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 base multinational companies triggers a price war with local vendors which reduces the profits
hence
 enforcing micro traders to lock their businesses.
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 Amazon gave big discounts on their website to expand their market reach which hampers the growth of small shops owners.
Hence
, economic development has certain repercussion on micro industries.
Moreover
, due to hectic lifestyle people prefer to visit a store where they can find different items under one roof. As sole traders are diminishing due to
rise
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 in multinational brands ultimately boost the production and maximize the utilization of
resourses
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resources
 with minimum wastage
thus
 making
product
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the product
a product
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 more economical and
compititive
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competitive
.
For instance
, China has
reduce
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 the input cost by increasing productivity.
Therefore
, shutting sole enterprise has certain benefits in
longer
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the longer
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 perspective.
Furthermore
, micro industries are mostly unorganised
hence
 its reduction will uprise the organise sector and help governments to increase tax revenue which could be
further
 invested in economic and social causes. To conclude, small and big businesses have
its
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 own pros and cons
however
,
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promoting the organise sector helps to raise the economic structure and individuals standard of living.
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