Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others feel this is not a good use of resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many are of the belief that it would be worthwhile for governments to prioritise the preservation of various minority
languages
. In my opinion, despite limited potential efficacy
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,efficacy
this
sentiment is justifiable.
Detractors of this
proposal argue that investment is unlikely to have a major impact. In order for minority groups to earn a living and enjoy the conveniences of the modern world
, they require knowledge of a nation’s most widely spoken language
. In fact, many indigenous peoples themselves desire to move away from their hometowns to live in large cities and join the modern workforce. For example
, in the Hmong people of Southeast Asia, it is typically the older generation that seeks to communicate in their native tongue and preserve traditional ways of life. The younger generation, generally, would rather learn the most useful language
and integrate with the dominant national culture. Therefore
efforts by governments oppose what individuals desire and are unlikely to be successful.
Nonetheless
, there is cultural value in preserving a language
. A language
uniquely represents and codifies the external world
. Everything from the verb structures and choice of nouns to the intonation and rhythm of the language
present
a singular way of interacting with and deciphering the Change the verb form
presents
world
at large. For example
, in many languages
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,languages
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, therefore,
therefore
are more likely to see events and objects differently. As the world
becomes increasingly globalised, I would argue that the importance of a plurality of perspectives only becomes more crucial. If such
languages
die out, they will likely never be resurrected and the world
will be poorer for the loss.
In conclusion, regardless of the potential challenges faced in preserving minority languages
, their continued existence is essential to diversity. Governments must therefore
make every effort to ensure their survival.Submitted by karampalvirk21 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
