Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, governments and non-governmental organizations have spent a good amount of money in protecting wild
animals
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people
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resources
have been devoted to the protection of Use synonyms
wildlives
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wildlife
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, I would argue that it is far from enough in terms of the Linking Words
resources
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people
have devoted to wildlife protection.
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resources
have been invested in protecting wild Use synonyms
animals
and birds. Use synonyms
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, governments in a number of countries have spent money in building wildlife preserve spaces, which aim at protecting the habitat of endangered species. Apart from authorities, there are multiple non-government organizations and individuals who have contributed Linking Words
resources
and effort to save wild Use synonyms
animals
.In the United States, Use synonyms
for instance
, a number of wild animal hospitals that rescue lives in the wilderness are funded by private companies or charity groups. The Linking Words
resources
that devoted have saved millions of lives.
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people
have put so much effort Use synonyms
in
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animals
, there are still many wild Use synonyms
animals
that are in danger. Some endangered species may disappear in the near future. I strongly believe that it is the responsibility of human to save the species that are in danger of extinction and preserve the diversity of Use synonyms
earth
. There are a lot of measures that can be taken to save endangered Add an article
the earth
animals
and to improve their living condition. Use synonyms
For example
, polar bears are facing the difficulties of food shortage Linking Words
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cause
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caused
the
climate change. I think more attention should be devoted to Correct article usage
apply
protect
wild Change the verb form
protecting
animals
like polar bears.
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people
have devoted a lot of fundings to protect wildlife, yet there are still many endangered Use synonyms
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people
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resources
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite