You are not happy with the course you are doing at the college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: • What course are you doing now? • Why you are not satisfied with that course? • What course would you like to change?

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Dear Sir I am Praveena enrolled on the Mechanical Engineering stream in your college. I completed my 12th with 95% marks and was among the top 50 in the entrance exam for your college. I was offered many choices from all the available branches of engineering. I opted for Mechanical at that time as I was interested to learn about the mechanics of running a machine, which now is getting over my head and I think I am not cut for that course. Recently, I attended a seminar on AI/ML and its impact on future generations. After attending the lecture, I became interested in computers and am giving a lot of thought to change my course and pursue Computer science. The current job trend

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showcases a lot of opportunities moving towards AI/ML implementation.

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we are just getting started in the course and I think changing career at

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point will have minimal impact. I would like you to allow me to alter my stream to computer science. Waiting to hear back from you. Yours Sincerely Praveena

Submitted by praveena.tirumala on Mon May 31 2021

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