You are planning for a vacation and want your friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • tell him/her why you want to take a vacation • describe your plan • invite him/her to go with you.

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Dear Hima, Hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am planning a trip to Crater Lake, United States of America

month and would like you to accompany me on

this

outing.

This

exotic location is on my bucket list for a long time due to its history and scenic location. Past few months the pressure to complete an important project was way too much and I need

this

vacation to rewind myself before the

project starts. To elaborate, I am planning a weeklong expedition to cover all the scenic places around the crater lake. I am thinking of booking our stay at the hotel situated at the highest point on the lake. There is a trek available for us to explore during our stay along with various food options. I really want you to accompany me on

this

tour . Take your time and think through

this

so that I can plan for the tickets and stay. Waiting for your reply eagerly. Yours Affectionately Praveena

Submitted by praveena.tirumala on Mon May 31 2021

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Examples:

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

178 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are planning for a vacation and want your friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • tell him/her why you want to take a vacation • describe your plan • invite him/her to go with you.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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